Revisions
Posted on May 14, 2007 by Mrs. Albanese
When you write an essay you should come up with a great opening line and introductory paragraph. Try using
- an anecdote
- a description of the person
- an interesting fact
When you write about a person avoid using cliches like “she is always there for me.” Try instead to give an example of why she is loving and giving.
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